tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8314236602333587430.post7217954057370110303..comments2010-08-10T18:06:05.265-07:00Comments on The Little Blog of Calm: Comic tiiiime!Bobbihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00830301417237189908noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8314236602333587430.post-10313068062409061642009-08-04T04:59:53.986-07:002009-08-04T04:59:53.986-07:00the graphic style is nice and gritty, but you migh...the graphic style is nice and gritty, but you might need to make the illusion of panels a bit clearer or find a way for the eye to follow the story with more definition. at the moment, its sort of like a whole heap of ideas were vomited up on a page and there are no clear links between them. awesome ideas that they are, it doesn't read well as a whole.<br /><br />hope that was relevant and helped.The Loud Onehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16273705368080443961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8314236602333587430.post-73861665918799390532009-08-04T04:07:09.751-07:002009-08-04T04:07:09.751-07:00Bobbi,I really like that style because it looks na...Bobbi,I really like that style because it looks naturalistic and will keep a great balance with your story which I'm guessing will be intelligent but will smack us in the head hard from left of centre. I guess i'm expecting some fun madness from you so the style is like a snapshot! First impression was wow, professional!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com