Bobbi's animation/national aeronautics and space administration.
Yes, I found a website that rhymes words.
Monday, August 3, 2009
Comic tiiiime!
Okay, so i'm posting my so-far ideas for the comic assignment... I want to hear some feedback to see if the style works, if you can tell what the environment is, etc.
Bobbi,I really like that style because it looks naturalistic and will keep a great balance with your story which I'm guessing will be intelligent but will smack us in the head hard from left of centre. I guess i'm expecting some fun madness from you so the style is like a snapshot! First impression was wow, professional!
the graphic style is nice and gritty, but you might need to make the illusion of panels a bit clearer or find a way for the eye to follow the story with more definition. at the moment, its sort of like a whole heap of ideas were vomited up on a page and there are no clear links between them. awesome ideas that they are, it doesn't read well as a whole.
I don't generally play well with others and like to draw.
I'm a producer at 31 Digital and I have my own animation, production and design business - Ninja Factory.
So I'm busy... all of the fekking time.
Bobbi,I really like that style because it looks naturalistic and will keep a great balance with your story which I'm guessing will be intelligent but will smack us in the head hard from left of centre. I guess i'm expecting some fun madness from you so the style is like a snapshot! First impression was wow, professional!
ReplyDeletethe graphic style is nice and gritty, but you might need to make the illusion of panels a bit clearer or find a way for the eye to follow the story with more definition. at the moment, its sort of like a whole heap of ideas were vomited up on a page and there are no clear links between them. awesome ideas that they are, it doesn't read well as a whole.
ReplyDeletehope that was relevant and helped.